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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:02 am Post subject:

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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:06 am Post subject:

Good woah or bad?
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:07 am Post subject:

Hella good whoa!!!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:08 am Post subject:

Thanks then.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:15 pm Post subject:

He had a dream of himself lifting a school bus over his head. It felt incredibly real. Thats when he heard a scream. He thought its was his dream but it wasent. He woke up and walked to the edge of his cell. He looked out at the main floor. What he saw was horrible. Bodies. Lots of them. Jack turned and threw up. He heard a noise be hind him and turned around quickly. A screen came out of the wall with the wardens face on it.
"Jack?"
"Yes."
"We need your help."
"Why?"
"Beacuse there has been a riot. Gaurds are beening killed every where. Super powered crimnals are breaking out and will kill more people along the way."
"Ya so."
"You have killed a dosen men in seconds!"
"Beacuse my life depended on it!"
"Well someone life depends on it."
"Who?"
"Your friend Carmen. She is hiding some where but we couldnt find her. We know she is safe beacuse she has a radio and has told us so. But its only a matter of time before they find her."
"I need a weapon."
"Check a gaurd. All the weapon stashes have been radied. We can give you a radio though."
The wall to the left of him opened up and a radio came out.
"Well....As soon as i save my friend i am outta here."
"But you need to help everyone else first!"
"I will make my way to her and if there are people that need help i will help them. But as soon as she is safe i am leaving."
"The prision?"
"Yes. I am going to find a new home."
"Well........"
"No Bull shit. Got that!"
"Ok. Just GO!"
Jack walked to the cell door. He tried to open it but it wouldnt go.
"Well.....Lets see if my dreams are true."
He grabbed the door with both hand and pulled with alll his might. The door flew off the hinges. Jack raced down the hall toward the noise of anger prisners. He rounded the first corner and found three men with shives standing there.
"Well if it isnt Jack Summers." The first one said.
"How do you know my name?"
"Personal files."
"Jackass."
"We heard you little girl friend was in the building. Were gonna find her and have some fun Wanna join?"
"NO! My plan is to stick you all with your own shives."
The first man ran at him and Jack side stepped.and kicked him in the gut. He pulled the shive from his hadn and ran toward the next one. This one swung for his head but he ducked and gutted him. Jack turned and punched the last one across the face. The man stummbled back and Jack kicked the shive into his gut. The man collapsed. He turned back around to face the last on who should have gotten up from that kick but didnt see him.He jumped right just as a shive punctered his left arm.
"How do you really know my name?"
"My brother was the one who gave you that scar over your right eye"
"The one armed man? How goes him and his one armed affairs? Oh wait. I forgot. I split his head open like a melon"
"Think your funny shrimp? This shive is going into your chest next."
"I am going to send you to hell."
The man charges Jack holding the shive out in front of him. Jack kicks it outta his hand,grabs it in mid air and slmas it down into the middle of the mans back. Then he just walks away. He walks down a few halls until he sees two men beating on a broom closet and hears a girl screaming. Jacks races forward screaming.
"LEAVE HER ALONE!!!!!!"
One of the men tuns as Jack punches him in the gut. He falls to the floor. Jack looks at the other man. He is holding a gun. He puts it in Jacks face and starts to pull the trigger. Jack knows its over. Suddenly the colset bursts open and Carmen smashes her radio across the mans face. She falls to the floor and Jack races towars her.
"O my god! You okay?"
She screams in surprise and throws her arm around Jack.
"I'm so glad your okay!" She says through seary eyes.
"We have to get out of here before we get hurt. Can you walk?"
"I'm fine. Just a little shaken up."
He steps past her and picks up the gun.
"How do we get out of here?"
"Follow me. I know the exact route."
They headed off into the unknown............
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:16 pm Post subject:

HOLY CRAP LOOK AT IT ALL!!!!!! Shocked

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A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 10:18 pm Post subject:

Well this looks good! There is a ton though! I don't think I have time to read this now! Maybe tommorow! Sorry Cowboy! I am leaving in 10!

I promise I will read this either tommorow or this weekend! I can't wait to dig in...
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 10:21 pm Post subject:

Take your time.
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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 3:11 am Post subject:

very orignal very cool very bloody

I love it
and i literally lol when i read o the one armed man how goes he and his one armed affairs lol

u make that up your self?

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 3:19 am Post subject:

Awesome, dude!!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 9:38 pm Post subject:

Surpriseinginly enough i did make that up on my on Rob.
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 11:04 pm Post subject:

They neared the front door when three men came in front of them He had seen all three on the news before. They were Norman Osborn,Magnet/Erik,and Proffeser Charles Xaiver.
Jack Summers. Do not listern to these men. One wants you to help them conquor the world and the other wants you to help kill Nick Firy. Said Proffeser Xaiver

How are you able to do that?

I am a muntant. I belive you are one to. But for now just humor these two.

Im not a muntant. I know that. I dont know what i am.

We will find out later. Just talk with these two but dont actually listen.

"Jack Summers. How would you like all the money you could ever imagine?" Norman asked
"Well my mother is dead and I dont know my father so i dont need money."
"What about for a home?"
"I can find my own home thanks."
"LISTEN YOU LITTLE FREAK!" Norman screamed
"NORMAN CALM DOWN!!" Erik yelled.
"You tell him big guy."
"Jack. Join me and together we can control this pitifull world. Picture a world where muntants like us RULE!"
"Two things there magnet. Im not a muntant. And Just beacuse you say RULE! Instead of jus saying Rule dosent mean I will do it."
"Just hear me out. You know what I am saying is right. Just join me and we can.."
"N OO! I dont want any part of any of you! BACK OFF!"
Noman suddenly began to change. He got bigger. And greener. Suddenly he was the side of a bus. He smacked Erik into Xaiver and rushed Jack. Before he could react Norman swatted him away and grabbed Carmen. She screamed at the top of her lungs.
"If you will not help me willingly then i will MAKE YOU!"
He broke through the door and out into the night.
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 11:06 pm Post subject:

Abusing your font size a little too much, doncha think? Anyway, awesome job!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 11:11 pm Post subject:

Ya i know. But i like it. It took me this long just to figure it out. Evil or Very Mad

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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 7:20 pm Post subject:

"NOO!" Jack screamed as he ran out the door. He stopped as he did. He relized that he wasnet at the new york penatentary. He was at a giant floating island on the New york harbor. He had seen it befreo and knew it belonged to the goverment. He saw Norman Jump onto a boat, He followed. He sprinted towards the docks at top speed and leaped on to the same boat as Norman.
"You a muntant you giant green freak?" Jack yelled to Norman as he landed.
"No. I purposly did this so i could do things like this." He said as he punched Jack aross the boat.
"Why do you want to kill the man named Nick Fury?"
"Who told you about that?"
"The man in the wheel chair."
"Thats going to have to wait until you join me."
"So im never going to know?"
Norman jumped at Jack. Jack punched him in the chest knocking him back.
Winded Norman asks.
"How are you so strong? Are you a muntant?"
"Why does everybody think that. HOLY CRAP!" Jcak screamed as he looked at New york. He yelled that beacuse there bost was seconds away from crashing into the docks........
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joemama5052 · Ving Rhames Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 868

sick!
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UltimateKevin! · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 7:29 am Post subject:

Bodacious!!
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CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 8:23 pm Post subject:

Thanks guys. and gals.
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rob-spidey-11 · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 9:06 pm Post subject:

good stuff i didnt know this takes place in the ult universe sweet

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 9:18 pm Post subject:

Ya. Its the only universe i can picture most chacters. Norman just isnt that cool on the little glider.
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