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Holy Wars.......The Punishment Due
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Keep it coming!
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 8:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here it is......

Gambit run into a dead end. The ruined part of the mansion. Destroyed after a sentinel attack. Dust float ever where. A couple hundres soliders come in behind him. Then he smiles.
"Do you guys think you can take me ? My last boss who brought me back from the dead tought me something before he inslaved me. He tought me a speical trick i can do with my powers. That trick being that i can charge small objects floating in the air." He says as he raies his fist.
The soilder stand strong.
"You cant expect us to belive that bull can you." one says.
"Fine. LET ME PROVE IT!" Gambit says as he stricks the ground with tremendes force. Dust filled the air. Gambit forced out all the energy he could and every dust spec exploded. Before the dust cleared Gambit passed out from exaughestion
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey!! How come you didn't PM me CowBoy? I've been waiting for a sequel!! Awesome!!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I pmd you like four time but every time i am on you are not. Like now for instince
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

...how wierd... Confused
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh....That post
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 10:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Gambit wakes up five mintue later do a terrible scream. He runs towards the sound.It takes him two mintues to find it. The back of the mansion. And he knows why they are screaming. There is a man dressed in full armor. With an evil looking blade that is covered in blood. And at his feet is Loagn. Cuts covering most of his body. A soilder run at Gambit swinging one of Nightcrawlers sowards. Gambit ducks and then hits the man in the gut. The soilder falls and Gambit picks up the blade.
Then he see them. The rest of his team in chains . All have been tourted.
"You'll pay!" Gambit yells as he runs towards the man. He swings and catchs the man in the side of the helm knocking it off.
"No....." Gambit barely wispers as he see's the man in front of him.

Daimein smiles.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AAAAAHHHHH!!!! DAMIEN IS BACK! NOOOOOOO...



Great cowboy! It gets better and better! Keep it up! Nice!
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 11:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocked But... How could Damien...?

DUN-DUN-DUN-DUUUUNNN!!!

kickbutt dude!!
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 11:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Surprised Shocked Surprised Shocked Surprised Shocked Surprised

YABUHWHAT!?!?!? I like it so far!
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 1:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Gambit doesnt hesitate. He leaps of the ground and attacks him. Ten mintues go by and Daimein hasnet broken a sweat. Gambit is gasping for breath. He is covered with cuts.
"How are you alive?" He askes'
"I told you. I WAS SENT BY GOD! UNTIL MY MISSION IS DONE HE WONT ALLOW ME TO DIE!" Daimein screams
Gambit charge as Daimein screams the last of his sentence.
He hope to catch him off gaurd but it is he who is off gaurd. He hold the blade in his left hand. As that hand go to strike Daimein swings his massive blade upwards.
Gambit looks down and see where his hand had been second before. As Gambit falls to his knees in shock Daimen goes for the final blow.......
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 2:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You know what's awesome? I read your story with "Powerman 5000- When Worlds Collide" blasting my surround sound so it sounded like a carzy fight scene from a movie. Great story so far!!
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 8:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ya i know. Every time i type i always have a song playing that is fasted paced if it a fight part or a slow song if it is a slow part.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

As Gambit sees the blade coming he looks at Rouge. He notice her stomach. ]
"She's pregnet...." He wispers.
He grabs the blade and slash Daimeins gut. He ries and begins attacking. Nothing Daimein does can stop the attack. Gambit slahs him across the chest and he falls back. As he land the blade pierces is chest. This time Gambit goes for the kill.

[b]BANG![/b]

Gambit falls a s a second bang is heard.



Logan wakes up as Gambit crashes to the floor. He scans the aera and sees the shooter. As he rushes toward him he gets shot. Logans eyes are not adjusted to the light so he dosent see the shooters face until he has tackled him.

"No............." Logan wispers




"C" Is all Logan can say
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You guys are gonna be mad at me
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A card explodes freeing the xmen and knocking Lgan off the shooter.

"NIGHTCRAWLER GET EVERYONE OUT!" Gambit screams.
Nightcrawler grabs Logan and teleports away.

Gambit blacks out as Rouges face dissapers in the black cloud.........
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh I wonder who the shooter is? This is great!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lets say there is a traitor
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Traitor? Uh oh!


I wonder who?
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 10:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This part is really quick but really good. Hopefully



The appear three miles away from the school. Kurt falls to the ground panting.
Jean looks at Logan.
"Are you ok...." She asks.
"No."
"Is it about Gambit?"
"No, He can handel himself."
"Then what is it?"
"The shooter. The one that tried to kill me and possibly killed Gambit."
"It wasent just another soilder?"
" No.......It was Proffeser X........
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