free forum make a forum for free message boards free forum hosting free phpbb forum phpbb create free forum

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 12:09 am Post subject:

He had taken out those three ten mintues and three blocks ago. He walked into times square. He stood there and looked around. Four people came into his view. The two from the front he knew very well. It was Ben and Carmen. There eyes lit up when they saw him. To his left was Cherry and to his right was Rick. Instanly he knew something was wrong. He looked up so see a man descend apon him. He held a Samurai sword. Jack blocked the attack but it was so strong his feet sank into the concret. He knocked the man back and jumped back. Every opponet he had ever fought would take a couple secs to charge again. But as Jack lifted his head the man was upon him. The man thrust his blade into Jack left shoulder pinning him to a wall. Jack thrust his blade at the man but the man smacked it out of his hands. He saw Rick running towards him and ducked his sword attack. He dealt a powerful blow to Rick stomach. Rick collasped. The man stood and Looked at Jack.
"Before you ask my name is Akuma. You will learn to fear this name boy." He said. He turned and walked toward Ben and Carmen leaving Jack stuck to the wall. Jack could barely hear what Akuma said to Ben but he got the jest of it. Ben was the other chosen one. And if he didnt join Akuma then he would kill the girl then him. Jack heard enough. He pulled the blade from his shoulder and picked up his. He rushed the man from behind. He thrust both blade towards the mans back, Akuma turned side ways letting both blades pass by just in time to save his life. He pointed his index finger of his right hand at Jack.
"DO YOU NOT KNOW THE RULE OF HONOR?!!!" He said. A unbearible pain errupted from Jacks chest.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Screamed Jack.
Suddenly it stopped. Akuma fell forward. Ben stood there holding his sword.
"There is no honor in threating a lady.
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

Free Forum

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 3:19 pm Post subject:

Akuma blasted Ben away.
"You'll die for that boy." He said.
Jack stood and punched him across the face. He swung again. Akuma blocked. They went on boxing. Jack kept swinging like a mad man. Akuma blocked most of the time. Jack faked a swing. Akuma tried to block it and Jack threw a real punch the hit right under Akumas chin. Akuma couldnt block. Jack charged forward beating on him. He punch he threw was stronger then the last. Jack went into finish it. Akuma punched him in the face.
"Cheater." Akuma said.
Jack picked up his sword as Akuma did. Akuma swung done. Jack blocked. He jumped back as Akuma tried to kick. Akuma swung sideways and Jack samacked it away with the palmm of his hand. As he did he slashed Akuma across the cheek. They stood faceing each other. Akuma smiled as it started raining heavily. Akuma jumped at him,sword out in front. Jack smacked the blade away with his. Akuma punched Jack across the face with his free hand. Jack went flying. Akuma smiled. Ben slashed him across the back again. Akuma turned and swung but this time Ben blocked. Akuma smacked him and swung again. Rick caught the blade between his palms. He held it as blood ran down his hands. Akuma say Ben swing at him. He used one of his hands to grab the blade while still hold Rick back.
"Weaklings." He said as he kicked both of them away. He turned to see Jack running at him. He swung but Jack disappeared.
"Bravo. Learning an advanced move with out traning." He said. Jack came from the left. Akuma swung but again he wasnet there. This time he came from the front. Akuma swung. As he didhe looked over his shoulder expecting to see Jack coming from behind. Suddenly he felt a sharpe pain in his gut. He looked forward. Akumas sword was an inch deep in Jack right side. Jacks sword was through Akumas stomach.
"Well I guess you cant teach a old dog new tricks." Jack said as blood ran outta his mouth.
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 10:33 pm Post subject:

Akuma sounds afully familiar... Street Fighter right?
_________________
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!! Mr. Green

"If we encounter hostiles, silent throat cuts only." -Brick Tamland

PSN ID -> Lieutenent_Gump

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 11:20 pm Post subject:

Well ya but thats not truly where i got it from. See i wanted the Japenese word dor Deamon and its apperently Akuma.
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 11:28 pm Post subject:

Oh, that's right...

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 11:29 pm Post subject:

Yup. Makes scince for his chacter in both game and my story. Crap. Ijust gave something away.
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 12:34 am Post subject:

"When will you finally understand that you cant beat me boy?" Akuma asked.
"Well im not so good at learning so........NEVER!" Jack yelled.
AKuma walks forward and the blade sinks deeper into his stomach. He walks straight up to the hilt. Then he smacks Jack away. Jack runs back at him.
"Then must die." Akuma says.
He pulls the sword the sword of his gut and thrusts it into Jacks chest.
Jack tries to say something but falls to his knees.
"You should have bowed in life. But now you bow in death." says Akuma.
Carmen screams. Cherry drops to her knees. Ben stares in disbelife of what he is seeing. Jack stares at Akuma.
"See. Im not going to die here. No one is. Ill bet my life on it.
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 1:12 am Post subject:

Hunh... Did not expect that at all...

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 1:14 am Post subject:

Thats what im going for.
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:09 pm Post subject:

Jack died sitting there. Blade through his chest. He woke up in hell.
Satan standing over him.
"Well. That worked."
"Welcome. Your soul has been tainted. It will rest here in eternal torment now."
"I'll make you a deal big guy. Let me go back."
"Why would i allow that?"
"Beacuse i you dont let me. THe guys up there will take your job when some one else send him down here. Let me back up there to finish him."
"Will you return peacefully?"
"Yes.When i die again."
"What was that?"
"Nothing. Now! You gonna send me back up there?"
"Youve made a deal with the devil. I honor my side. You will honor yours. So be it. When Akuma dies. You returen."
"Will you hurry this up? My firends are in danger up there. And dont worry. For all my other deals I'll Make sure to get them from you."
Satan smiled.
"I dont know weather your a fool or a coward."
Jack opened his eyes. Akuma was fighting Rick and Ben. He was beatinbg them both badly. Jack looked at his chest. The wound was gone. His sword lay next to him. He picked up his sword.
"AKUMA!!!"
Akuma turned around.
"Like i said. No one will die here today."
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 11:13 pm Post subject:

Oh!! Nice!

A1 Steak Sauce · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 11:15 pm Post subject:

Hey, I'm caught up! Great stuff Cowboy!!!!!!!!!
_________________
"THE ULTIMATE MARVEL TRIVIA GAME! C'mon it's Fun!"

A1 Steak Sauce

Proud member of THE ULTIMATE MARVELS!!!! Mr. Green

MOON KNIGHT

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 11:46 pm Post subject:

"What has god wroght upon us in this fight?" Akuma asked.
"Hate to tell ya this Akuma. But gods sitting this one out." Jack said as he sprinted towards Akuma. He swung his sword but Akuma blocked. Jack was amazing. Every attack was more powerful then the last. AKuma woulndt hold on much longer.Akuma swung his sword at Jack head. Jack caught it in his hand. He threw both there swords away. Akuma tried to kick. Jack blocked and threw a punch. The stood. Not moving expect throwing punchs and blocking. Akuma sucker punched Jack back.
"Face it Akuma. We are evenly matched."
Akuma slimed and his eyes began to change color. Suddenly a blast of energy hit Jack sending him flying back. He got off the ground where he landed and looked at Akuma. He was flying towards Jack. He grabbed Jack and threw him back down towards the other end of the street.
He and landed and looked at Akuma.
"He can fly too. He can do all that. Then theres only one way to do it." Jack said.
He sprinted and grabbed his sword. He then ran into a building. He made it to the stairs when he heard Akuma smash through the wall. As he sprinted up the stairs he pulled a small bungie cord from his pocket. It was only a couple feet in length but for his plan to work it need to be about that long. He busted thrugh the door to the roof with Akuma just behind him. He tied one end of the cord to his sword and held the other end in his hand.
"COME ON AKUMA!!!" Jack screamed.
Akuma flew at him full force and tackled him off the roof. As the flew up Jack spoke.
"You forgot that we are equals in strength."
"HA! Did you not see what did to you?"
Jack smiled and pulled his sword..He threw the sword down with all his might. It pulled him and Akuma down too. The bungie cord pulled its full lenght and came flying back. Jack hit Akuma and Akuma dropped him just as Jacks sword stabbed through his chest. Akuma was stunned. Jack pulled hard and pulled Akuma down to him.Jack. stepped on top of him just as the hit the ground.........
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:56 am Post subject:

Awesome!

joemama5052 · Ving Rhames Joined: 27 Jan 2007 Posts: 868

whoa baby!
_________________
Proud member of the Ultimate Marvels!

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:24 am Post subject:

"How are you not dead?" Jack asked.
"Beacuse im unstopable." Akumasaid.
"Well thats good to know but still..."
"Think the fights unfair huh?"
"Ya. I mean come on."
"Well lifes not fair" As he said that his face changed into Jacks father.
"Dad....."

Suddenly Jack woke up sitting on the ground. He was propped up against the wall of a building. He stood up slowely.There was a note next to him. It was from Carmen.
It read.
Jack,
We checked your pulse. Your dead. But i dont belive it. You should have died that night on the bridge but you didnt. Your brother had a radio on him. He said they were going to air strike the city....Please.....please wake up... I couldnt......I cant stand to lose you again...... Your brother said we couldnt carry you beacuse we wouldnt get out of the city if we did. Jack I.......I lo......Just please wak up....
"Well it looks like i should start running." He picked up his sword and sprinted towards the highway........
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:30 am Post subject:

"How are you not dead?" Jack asked.
"Beacuse im unstopable." Akumasaid.
"Well thats good to know but still..."
"Think the fights unfair huh?"
"Ya. I mean come on."
"Well lifes not fair" As he said that his face changed into Jacks father.
"Dad....."

Suddenly Jack woke up sitting on the ground. He was propped up against the wall of a building. He stood up slowely.There was a note next to him. It was from Carmen.
It read.
Jack,
We checked your pulse. Your dead. But i dont belive it. You should have died that night on the bridge but you didnt. Your brother had a radio on him. He said they were going to air strike the city....Please.....please wake up... I couldnt......I cant stand to lose you again...... Your brother said we couldnt carry you beacuse we wouldnt get out of the city if we did. Jack I.......I lo......Just please wak up....
"Well it looks like i should start running." He picked up his sword and sprinted towards the highway........
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 12:30 am Post subject:

Why did it post it twice and one time in bold......... Shocked

_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

UltimateKevin! · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:47 pm Post subject:

Nice, man!! Smile

CowBoy From Hell · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:48 pm Post subject:

Youll like the next part man.
_________________
CowBoy From HEll
Proud Member of The Ultimate Marvels!!

[

Free Forum